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要检查复核，不要写完了事。
要留时间通读全文，修改可能出现的错误。检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅。检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合适，是否有语法错误，主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯，是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误等，还有就是注意卷面整洁。
可归纳为：中心突出，主题明确;层次清楚，条理清晰; 表达力强，传情达意;语句通顺，句型多变;过渡自然，衔接紧凑;标点正确，大小无误;字迹清楚，卷面整洁。
以上是一些写作技巧以及相关的一些注意事项。
概要写作要求结构完整合理、语言表达规范。学生对要点进行梳理整合后，按顺序组合在一起就成了初稿。按照概要写作的评分标准，在文章完成之后还需要对其进行适当检查修改，这样才能成为终稿。除了检查要点是否齐全、观点是否与原文一致、各要点的衔接与过渡是否自然、词数是否符合要求这些重要的点以外，考生还需要注意书写规范、字迹工整、卷面整洁。
阅读下面短文，然后用60个单词左右概括短文的要点。
Getting ridof dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there isnothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt onthe skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it thatwashing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. Aparticular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French kinghad closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt ina friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learningthat a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack ofdisease, the nobleman should not go out.
Though the belief in the advantage ofdirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor eversince the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good tohealth. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventingdisease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond sciencesince World War Ⅱ. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea;clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?
Attitudes to dirt still differ hugelynowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children offtouching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On thecontrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家),encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. Andthe latter position is gaining some reason.
4段，它按照时间的顺序、总-分的方式来陈述人们在不同时期对于“dirt”的不同观点，即Attitudes towards dirt have been changingover time。文章第一段的第二句是全文的主旨，第二、三、四段都是在不同时期人们对于“dirt”的不同看法，基本可以确定attitudes、dirt和time为全文的关键词。其中第二段是讲在16世纪，欧洲一些国家特别是英法两国中的皇室贵族们对于“dirt”的态度；第三段是讲在18世纪时，人们对于“dirt”态度发生的变化；第四段则是讲述现在人们虽然仍对“dirt”持有不同的观点，但是却有越来越多的人认为playing in the dirt help people build astrong immune system。通过梳理整合这些要点，可以得出文章的概要。
概要范文：
Attitudestowards dirt have been changing over time. In the 16thcentury, people believed that dirt on the skin helped protect againstdisease. Since the 18th century, however, people havedeveloped the belief that cleaning away dirt can prevent disease. Today, althoughattitudesto dirt still differ sharply, more and more people choose to believe thatplaying in the dirt can help build up a strong immune.(60 words)
对照上述评分原则，可以发现此范文：（1）精确地表达了文本所有4个要点，并且对文本的内容进行了归纳、提炼和整合；（2）准确地使用了相应的语法结构和词汇，例如在表达“持有某种观点”这一意思的时候，选用了三个不同的表达方法“believe”，“develop the belief”，“choose to believe”，避免了重复；（3）上下文之间用了恰当的连接词“however”，“although”等，使行文紧凑浑然一体；（4）对文中的要点运用语义转换，完全使用自己的语言来表达；例如要点1用Attitudes towards dirt have been changing代替原文第一段的第二句话there is nothing fixed about attitudes todirt；要点2用protect against disease 代替block out against；要点3中用prevent disease代替is good for health；要点4用today代替nowadays，用sharply代替hugely，用more and more people choose to believe 代替gaining some ground；（5）全文60词，非常符合词数要求。
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today’s star, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of much of the world’s attention. Paparazzi camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids (小报) publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.
According to psychologist Christina Villarreal, celebrities — famous people — worry constantly about their public appearance. Eventually, they start to lose track of who they really are, seeing themselves the way their fans imagine them, not as the people they were before everyone knew their names. “Over time,” Villarreal says, “they feel separated and alone.”
The phenomenon of tracking celebrities has been around for ages. In the 4th century ., painters followed Alexander the Great into battle, hoping to picture his victories for his admirers. When Charles Dickens visited America in the 19th century, his sold-out readings attracted thousands of fans, leading him to complain about his lack of privacy. Tabloids of the 1920s and 1930s ran articles about film-stars in much the same way that modern tabloids and websites do.
Being a public figure today, however, is a lot more difficult than it used to be. Superstars cannot move about without worrying about photographers with modern cameras. When they say something silly or do something ridiculous, there is always the Internet to spread the news in minutes and keep their “story” alive forever.
If fame is so troublesome, why aren’t all celebrities running away from it? The answer is there are still ways to deal with it. Some stars stay calm by surrounding themselves with trusted friends and family or by escaping to remote places away from big cities. They focus not on how famous they are but on what they love to do or whatever made them famous in the first place.
Sometimes a few celebrities can get a little justice. Still, even stars who enjoy full justice often complain about how hard their lives are. They are tired of being famous already.
One possible version:
Living in the public gaze, stars suffer from great pressure. （要点 1）What’s worse, anxiety over their public appearance robs them of the objective self-image, which leads to the feeling of isolation in the long term. （要点 2） While being tracked has been a headache to celebrities for centuries, modern cameras and the Internet make it harder to be famous nowadays. （ 要 点 3. 4） However, by dealing with the stress wisely, stars still can stay popular and happy. （要点 5）
第一段提到了一种现象：现在的家长对孩子表扬太多，但太多不真诚的表扬会导致孩子产生惧怕心理；
第二段讲到表扬太少也不好，表扬太少会让孩子觉得不够被重视，成功没意义；
第三段解释了何谓正确的表扬方式：那就是高质而真诚的表扬；
第四段讲到了最重要的是表扬过程而不是结果，它可以让家长更好地认识自己的孩子。还有表扬要基于事实以及孩子为之付出的努力。
从结构上看这四段文字就是：表扬很多不好——表扬很少也不好——要有质量的表扬——表扬过程和努力。
Parents praise their children to promote their confidence, but the overpraise may lead to an opposite effect. （要点1）However, inadequate praise is also harmful as it deprive kids of motivation.（要点2）Actually, what really matters is the quality of praise, which should be sincere and concentrate on process rather than result.（要点3）Praise offers encouragement and recognition, while it should be based on the facts and correspond with the effort.（要点4）（66 words）
高考英语写作经典句型
3. It will exercise a profound influence upon...
4. Its consequence can be so great that...
12)批驳
1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that...
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6) It makes no sense to argue for ...
7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ...
9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ...
13)举例
1) A good case in point is ...
2) As an illustration, we may take ...
3) Such examples might be given easily.
4) ...is often cited as an example.
14)证明
1) No one can deny the fact that ...
2) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...
4) Recent studies indicate that ...
5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ...
6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ...
15)开篇
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...
6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.
7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...
8) According to a recent survey, ...
9) With the rapid development of ..., ...
16)结尾
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...
3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...
4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...
5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.
6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...
7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...
10) Taking all these into account, we ...
11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
Dear Editor.
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance
fee should be charged for parks.
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
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