专八写作范文(3篇)

专八写作范文 第1篇

《落笔生花——新托福学术写作高分范文精选》第一部分详细介绍新TOEFL考试改革后的样式，特别是学术写作部分改革后的样式。并附有学术写作这一考核形式的评分标准，能够帮助托福考生了解学术写作考试逻辑及得分重点，更好地调整写作思路和备考方向。

本书的第二部分，是新托福学术写作高分范文。通过20道学术写作题，详细解读学术写作的出题点、构思、行文逻辑、论述步骤、词汇使用。每道写作题提供了至少两篇高分范文，题目和范文均提供中文译文。

值得一提的是，这20道学术写作题均改写自2020～2023年独立写作真题（原考试题型），相应的范文都是由曾经被ETS打过满分的考场作文改编的。

本书的第三部分，包含新托福学术写作5大类题材，共44个话题范文，给您更多话题，更多思路，更多视角，更多参考。

专八写作范文 第2篇

The Internet and Personal Privacy

Much as we enjoy the convenience brought by the Internet, we are sometimes unaware of the intrusion on our privacy via the Net because many of the things we do online are recorded by data-digging software. This violation of privacy may have serious consequences such as the possibility of the Internet criminal acts, unconscious manipulation of our thoughts based on the profiles made by the stolen information left by us and worst of all the devaluation of the concept of privacy. In nature, the intrusion on privacy is a crime against our liberty and happiness.

Despite the lavish feast brought about by the Internet we relish every day, we have to admit that more frequently than ever, we are mired in the pothole of online security being breached and personal data being plundered. Incredibly myriad data about our lives are being harvested from the traces we leave on the Internet. This data-digging, either for the targeted advertisers or malicious con artists  and creeps, has eroded our privacy.

One consequence is that our personal data may fall into the wrong hands so that criminal syndicates  can wantonly use the stolen information to commit crimes of various kinds. Another consequence is that it would be a violation of the privacy which is supposed to be there when we surf the Internet. If whenever we go about our business online, we find someone else looking at our secrets “electronically”, it would not only be a chilling lesson for our ethics but also the fiercest infringement of our liberty. The very idea of free will and free speech ensured by the anonymity of the Internet might evaporate because of the   data-mining software run by either well-intended or ill-intended individuals or organizations.

To solve this problem, privacy products should be developed and promoted. But a deeper look at this issue tells us that harsh legal punishment and moral lessons should be imposed on those data-vultures. Only in this way can the enshrined privacy be fully guaranteed.

■闪光词句

1. in nature 本质上

2. harvest...from... 从……采集……

3. fall into the wrong hands 落入不法之徒手中

4. go about one's business 忙某人的事情​​​​

专八写作范文 第3篇

▪ 尝试使用词汇和短语去回应任务，但是几乎没有或完全没有连贯的观点表达，句式词汇的使用极其有限；

▪ 有严重且频繁的语言错误；

总的来看，想在学术讨论写作中获得5分，在语言写作表达上需要句型多样化、精准的地道的用词、并且要保证没有语法和词汇错误。

也就是说，虽然写作时间变短了，但是对于语言上来说，要求是不仅仅清晰达意，更要灵活多样、表达地道精准。

但是我们大部分同学在早期写作学习部分，往往会投入大量的精力去写段落、写篇章，忽略了语言基本功的训练，这将会造成在练习学术讨论写作内容时长期与高分无缘的困境。