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Dear Chris,
I am sincerely inviting you to join us to go for an outing this weekend.Aiming to enhance our relation and build up our bodies,the trip involves climbing mountains and a is scheduled,the activity will take place at 8:00am on Saturday at the gate of our scholl and we hope all the students in our class will take an activite part in is an important part of the pushing our strength to the limit,we are also breathing fresh air and appreciating the gorgeous scenery on the way.(软件翻译:我真诚地邀请你这个周末和我们一起去郊游。为了增进我们的关系,增强我们的体质,这次旅行包括爬山和野餐。按照计划,活动将于周六上午8点在我们学校门口举行,我们希望我们班所有的学生都能参加。爬山是旅行的一个重要部分。在尽最大努力的同时,我们也在呼吸新鲜空气,欣赏沿途的美景。)
Hope you won't miss the joyful attendance is greatly expected.
Yours,
Li Hua
我的点评和写作
上面这篇范文和题目一起找到的,这篇范文我感觉写得不好,
1、出游邀请把“改善关系,增强体魄”这样的活动目的写上去没有意义,反倒显得累赘、尴尬。
2、不同活动内容应该分段介绍,这样会更加清楚。
3、要增加的内容应该是一些注意事项而非添加赘述(While pushing our strength to the limit,we are also breathing fresh air and appreciating the gorgeous scenery on the way)
下面,我将以作文要求的朋友身份邀请外国友人参加活动。
Hi Chris!
I am sincerely inviting you to join us to go for a trip this weekend. It involves climbing and a picnic. The mountain is the famous one in our city, I'm sure you will satisfied with the sightseeing and get a nice memory with us.(一段简洁地直接说明目的)
Pls don't forget take some drink and foods, although I will take your part, I'm curious what food you will take on a trip.(提醒他自带食物)
If you have any other plan, don't hesitate, we will have other trip next time. Even if I really expect you can join, I don't want to bother you because of our invitation.(非常有礼貌的一段,替他人考虑。这样一来,如果你是真的希望他来参加的,成功率反而高。这样的结尾会让对方知道你的好意,把你的事情排在前面)
Yours,
Li Hua.
假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1. 栏目介绍;2. 稿件内容;3. 稿件长度:约400词;4. 交稿日期:6月28日前。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter,I’d like to ask you towrite anarticle for our school's English newspaper. ...
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Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for ourschool’s English “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper isvery popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friendsabout the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write somethingabout the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especiallywelcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, andthe life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant solong as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could wehave your article before June 28?I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,Li Hua
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 推荐他上哪所大学;
3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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I'm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it&...
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