2022外研社写作大赛初赛范文(实用4篇)

2022外研社写作大赛初赛范文 第1篇

Feeling of youth

No young man believes he shall ever die. it was a saying of my brother's, and a fine one. there is a feeling of eternity in youth, which makes us amend for everything. to be young is to be as one of the immortal gods. one half of time indeed is flown-the other half remains in store for us with all its countletreasures; for there is no line drawn, and we see no limit to our hopes and wishes. we make the coming age our own-

The vast, the unbounded prospect lies before us.

Death. old age. are words without a meaning. that paby us like the idea air which we regard not. others may have undergone, or may still be liable to them-we _bear a charmed life“, which laughs to scorn all such sickly fancies. as in setting out on delightful journey, we strain our eager gaze forward-

Bidding the lovely scenes at distance hail!

And see no end to the landscape, new objects presenting themselves as we advance; so, in the commencement of life, we set no bounds to our inclinations. nor to the unrestricted opportunities of gratifying them. we have as yet found no obstacle, no disposition to flag; and it seems that we can go on so forever. we look round in a new world, full of life, and motion, and ceaseleprogress; and feel in ourselves all the vigor and spirit to keep pace with it, and do not foresee from any present symptoms how we shall be left behind in the natural course of things, decline into old age, and drop into the grave. it is the simplicity, and as it were abstractedneof our feelings in youth, that （so to speak） identifies us with nature, and （our experience being slight and our passions strong） deludes us into a belief of being immortal like it. our short-lives connection with existence we fondly flatter ourselves, is an indissoluble and lasting union-a honeymoon that knows neither coldness, jar, nor separation. as infants smile and sleep, we are rocked in the cradle of our wayward fancies, and lulled into security by the roar of the universe around us0we quaff the cup of life with eager haste without draining it, instead of which it only overflows the more-objects prearound us, filling the mind with their magnitude and with the strong of desires that wait upon them, so that we have no room for the thoughts of death.

2022外研社写作大赛初赛范文 第2篇

决赛选手在语言使用方面已较少出现语句不通或词不达意的情况，故不赘述。

如果苛刻一点，若选手能对故事背景略带一笔，衬托出攻关背后的动力，则更能表现出《愚公移山》的精华之处。 “perseverance”毋庸置疑是愚公精神，但是愚公的“愚”无一例外，并非从个人名利出发，建立在“小我”之上，而是建立在公众乃至人类的进步上，是大公无私，利在千秋的伟业。这一点也是许多选手忽视的。马博士科研攻关，培育新品种的巨大精神动力应该也是为了有更多人受益。 愚公精神，一是“愚”，二是“为公之愚”。

读完这篇记叙文和专家点评，小伙伴们是不是深受启发、受益匪浅？是不是对愚公精神有了更加深刻的理解？你会为“愚公移山”撰写怎样的全新故事？你还知道哪些立“愚”志、抒“公”怀的“当代愚公”呢？欢迎来留言区交流！

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2022外研社写作大赛初赛范文 第3篇

“惊喜——失望——决心重来——再次惊喜”的情节与情绪相一致。前一天晚上的惊喜，在大量衰败的秧苗中惊现一枝独秀，No. 106，成竹在胸。然而胜利果实意外被盗，犹如一盆凉水倾盆而下。就在马博士细心地检查实验田，为新征程做准备之际，又有了“无心插柳柳成荫”的意外惊喜。在No. 106不远处，一株瘦小的备选苗正呈现出更加旺盛的生命力。如果故事止于“重头再来”，也算是一个现代版的“愚公移山”的故事。但是这位选手却能一波三折，再次掀起高潮，并升华主题。题目“Being Planted”的含义与“perseverance”更是相映得彰。

2022外研社写作大赛初赛范文 第4篇

First, my math teacher is patient with me. She helps me to study math better. Second, my classmates help me a lot. I'm not good at friend Li Yun helped me with running and I ran , I care about my teachers and day my English teacher had a cold and I told her to drink more hot water. She felt warm and thanked me.

I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place.