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48 Write an essay based on the following chart in your writing, you should
(1)interpret the chart ,and
(2)give your comments
You should write about 150 words
范文：
As is revealed in the bar chart, the proportion of the students taking part-time jobs has changed. The proportion increases slowly from freshmen to juniors, while that of the seniors surges to .
Taking a part-time job has both pros and cons. Firstly, college students can get a chance to put their ideas into practice. Secondly, to take a part-time job provides those students who are eager to be independent a sense of achievement. Also, students who shoulder heavy burden from their family can make some money to lessen their parents’ financial crisis. Nevertheless, issues will rise. In order to take part-time jobs, some students are frequently absent from classes and even cannot pass the final exam. Therefore, they may lose their credits as well as their diplomas.
As far as I am concerned, I’ll strike for a balance between my study and part-time jobs. If I do not have enough spare time, I choose to abandon part-time jobs without hesitation, throwing myself into my major task, that is, study.
My dear classmates，
May I have your attention, please? On the evening of January 4th, 2013, namely, this Friday night, we will hold a charity sale at the school auditorium for the purpose of helping the children who need help.
Those kids who come from remote areas lack proper and fine education. Our assistance can improve their lives and even may change their destinies. Some stars, local industrial bosses and all the staff of our school will attend the activity.
I trust that everyone has a kind heart and believe that our help can really make a big difference. Thank you very much for your kindness and I am looking forward to seeing you on time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
(注：电子邮件的格式可以采用“齐头式”，即为了换行方便而每行开头都以顶头的格式对齐。需要注意的是，齐头式写法段落之间要空一行。)
47. Suppose your class is to hold a charity sale foe kids in need of help. Write your classmates an email to
1) inform them about the details and encourage them to participate .
2) Don’t use your own name, use “Li Ming” instead. Don’t write your address.(10 points)
【参考范文】
Dear Fellow Classmates,
Our class is to hold a charity sale to raise money for those children who are in need of help on January 5, 2013. As the monitor of our class, I’m calling on all students to take part in it.
We ask you to donate as much as you can to a fund we have set up to cover their tuition fees and other expenses. Unless we can raise sufficient money, those poor kids won’t be able to afford their education and finish school.
As a nation renowned in the world for many of its virtues, we Chinese people have been giving a helping hand to those who are in distress throughout history. It’s our duty to provide as much support as we can in this hour of need. Please contribute generously.
suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help. write your classmates an email to
1) inform them about the details and
2)encourage them to participate 100 words use 't write your address。
In the bar chart, it shows the changes of the proportion of the students having part-time jobs during the four years’ study in college. The proportion increases slightly from the first year to the third year, however, the fourth year has witnessed a fast increase, surging to .
There is no denying that this trend is very pervasive in current colleges and in a certain degree is quite proper. To begin with, when students in their first year in college, their major job is to study, not to work. They have to lay a profound knowledge base so that they make a good preparation for future work. What’s more, when students are going to step out of school and enter into the society, they have to know lots of experience , for example, how to deal with challenges outside, so they need to have some part-time jobs. Clearly, doing a part time job has many advantages. Students can learn how to get along well with others and know the society more profoundly. Secondly, to take a part-time job provides the students with a valuable opportunity to put what he has learned from books into practice. Finally, students can make some money, which helps to unload their families’financial burden.
Due to the analysis above, to be an eligible heir of socialism construction, you have to strike a balance between your study and the job. Study is your major task while a part time job is a minor one though work experience is desirable.
What can be seen from the chart is the proportion change of students having part-time jobs during the four years’ college study. The proportion increases slightly from the first year to the third year, however, the fourth year has witnessed a dramatic increase, surging to .
There is no denying the fact that this trend is very pervasive in current colleges and, to some extent, quite proper. It is not difficult to come up with some possible factors accounting for this trend. To begin with, the major jobs of freshman and sophomore are to study, and to lay a solid foundation for their future work. What’s more, when students are going to step out of school and enter into society, they have to master lots of practical skills, for example, how to deal with challenges outside, so they have to take part in some part-time jobs. Apparently, doing part time job has many advantages. On the one hand, students can learn how to get along well with others and know the society more profoundly. On the other hand, to take a part-time job provides students with a valuable opportunity to put what they have learned from books into practice and make some money, which helps to reduce their families’ financial burden.
Due to the analysis above, this trend will continue for quite a while in the future. And it should be pointed out that study is the major task for college students though work experience is valuable. Students have to strike a balance between study and part-time job.
Directions:
Suppose your class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help. Write your classmates an email to
2) encourage them to participate.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Don?t write your address.(10 points)
【经典范文】
Dear classmates,
I am writing this letter to inform that our class is going to hold a charity sale for the needy children in rural area of our province who have dropped out of school because their parents cannot afford their education. This activity will be held on our school’s playground on next Monday, January 22.
It is universally acknowledged that children are regarded as flowers and future of our nation; however, because of poverty, a growing number of kids in remote villages lost their learning opportunities which are not only crucial for their personal growth, but also essential for the sound development of the whole society. Consequently, there is no doubt that it is a noble cause to donate money to needy children through charity sale.
I really appeal to all the students to take part in this event and I will be grateful if you could come and give your donation.
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