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材料一为家教机构的宣传材料,说明了家教辅导的重要性,并说明了机构能够提供何种服务以激发学生能力,帮助学生提高成绩。
材料二为新闻报道,提到最高教育委员会认定家教辅导是违法的,以及接下来会采取的打击行动和辅助措施,呼吁学生将注意力集中到课堂上而不是去依赖家教。
两篇文章对课外辅导的评价都不够全面,考生可以总结每篇文章的合理之处并点出其局限性,容观地评价课外辅导。
根据题目要求,考试可采取以下文章结构:
第一段:总结两篇文章的大意,提出自己的观点——课外辅导应该保留,但同时学校应该开设课程帮助学生。
第二段:指出第一种观点的合理之处——帮助学生更有效地学习。
第三段:通过指出第一种观点的不足之处论证第二种观点的担忧不无道理。之后补充说明第二种观点过于绝对。
第四段:总结全文,重申观点一一不应该一刀切地禁止课外辅导。
My View on Private Tutoring
我对私人辅导的看法
Private tutoring has long been a hotly debated topic on【一直是一个备受争议的话题】 which schools, parents and teachers hold divergent views. In the first excerpt, private tutoring is said to be a magic cure for those students who have trouble learning some of the subjects at school, while in the second reading, it is regarded as an “unhealthy” practice that should be banned altogether. Both views are one-sided【片面的】. Personally, private tutoring should be kept as an option; meanwhile, schools can provide special classes for the students who need extra help.
长期以来,家教一直是一个备受争议的话题,学校、家长和教师对此持有不同的观点。在第一篇节选中,家教被认为是学生在学校学习某些科目有困难的灵丹妙药,而在第二篇中,家教被认为是一种不健康的“做法,应该被完全禁止”。这两种观点都是片面的。就我个人而言,私人辅导应该是一种选择;同时,学校可以为需要额外帮助的学生提供特殊课程。
There is no denying that【不可否认】 private tutoring aids those students who fail to grasp lessons. Not everyone learns in the same way. Some students learn more quickly and effectively than others. Additionally, in most public schools, a subject teacher is usually responsible for so many students that he or she cannot cater for【满足】 every student. That is where private tutoring has a part to play【能发挥作用】 by offering tailor-made【私人订制的】 coaching. Private tutoring helps students learn in a more effective fashion and motivates them to work harder on the subjects that may frustrate them.
不可否认,私人辅导帮助那些不能掌握课程的学生。不是每个人的学习方式都一样。有些学生比其他学生学得更快更有效。此外,在大多数公立学校,学科老师通常负责这么多学生,他或她不能满足每个学生。这就是私人家教可以发挥作用的地方,它提供量身定制的指导。私人辅导可以帮助学生以更有效的方式学习,并激励他们在可能会让他们沮丧的科目上更加努力。
However, in some countries, private tutoring has diverged from【偏离】 its primary objective of aiding those who need extra help and aims to make excellent students even more competitive. This explains why it is curbed or even banned in these countries. They turn to school-organized special classes, which are intended to boost the academic performances of some students and to reduce unfair advantages gained by the students who can afford expensive private tuition. But it has gone too far【过分】 to ban private tutoring since there are always some students who, for one reason or another, prefer private tutoring over lessons offered by schools.
然而,在一些国家,私人家教已经偏离了帮助那些需要额外帮助的人的主要目标,旨在使优秀的学生更有竞争力。这就解释了为什么在这些国家它会受到限制甚至被禁止。他们转向学校组织的特殊课程,这些课程旨在提高一些学生的学习成绩,并减少那些负担得起昂贵私人补习的学生所获得的不公平优势。但是,由于总有一些学生出于这样或那样的原因,更喜欢私人辅导而不是学校提供的课程,因此禁止私人辅导就太过分了。
Overall, prohibiting private tutoring is too narrow and imprudent【轻率】. It is advisable【明智的】 to offer alternative options, like school-based special classes as a counterbalance【平衡】 or complement to private tutoring.
总而言之,禁止私教过于狭隘和轻率。建议提供其他选择,比如以学校为基础的特殊课程,作为私人辅导的平衡或补充。(译文源自有道翻译)
[1] “_______xxxThis biblical reference has been ____Similarly, ____Therefore, I think it is universally acknowledged that “_____ ”.
首段根据名言明确提出自身的见解。
[2]First of all_____,Some people might claim that ____. The logical fallacy of this thought is _____. There are times______ . According to scientific research______, . Besides,______ also testifies to the fact that______ . These two studies all assure us that______ .
第二段批驳错误观点,进而论述自身的见解。
[3]What is more_______, . A mildly humorous story goes like this_______. .This story mocks and in its implicit way tells us that _______. This was especially true _______. There is no doubt that_______ .
第三段进一步论述自身的见解。
[4]To conclude_______, in at least two senses:_______ . Whilst there is nothing wrong to_______ , we could be better off to_______ .
末尾段开展小结。
PART V WRITING [45 MIN]
Read carefully the following two excerpts on private tutoring (主题词), and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 300 WORDS, in which you should:
1. summarize the main messages in the two excerpts, and then
2. express your opinion on the issue, especially on whether private tutoring should be promoted or prohibited.
You can support yourself with information from the excerpts.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
Write your article on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.
Excerpt1
Why Tutoring is Important为什么辅导很重要
Not every child learns the same way. Some children learn faster than others. Luckily, for any student who falls a little behind or has trouble in a particular subject there is tutoring available to help them. Some parents believe their child does not need tutoring help, but many others may prefer instead to have their child receive some extra help after class.
不是每个孩子都以同样的方式学习。有些孩子比其他孩子学得快。幸运的是,对于任何在某一特定科目上落后或有困难的学生,都有辅导可以帮助他们。一些家长认为他们的孩子不需要辅导,但许多家长可能更喜欢让孩子在课后接受额外的帮助。
In our educational center, we believe that tutoring is very important in the world of academics. Honestly, there is certainly no shame that【这不是什么丢人的事】 your child may need a tutor. No matter what subject your child needs help in, we can design a tailored【量身定制】 program that suits your child's needs. Whether it is Math, English, Reading, or Study Skills, there is always a tutor available to help you and your child. Among the most popular requested tutors are math tutors. Although your child may not be a math whiz, we firmly believe every child has the greatest capacity to excel in【脱颖而出】 any subject if given the right preparation and tutoring.
在我们的教育中心,我们相信家教在学术界是非常重要的。老实说,你的孩子可能需要一个家庭教师,这当然不是什么丢人的事。无论您的孩子需要什么科目的帮助,我们都可以为您的孩子量身定制课程。无论是数学、英语、阅读还是学习技能,总有一位导师可以帮助你和你的孩子。其中最受欢迎的导师是数学导师。虽然您的孩子可能不是数学天才,但我们坚信,如果给予正确的准备和辅导,每个孩子都有最大的能力在任何学科上脱颖而出。
Frequently there are times that a child starts to learn something new in school, only to get frustrated that they are having difficulty in understanding the basic concepts. If they do not learn the fundamental concepts well, it will only cause the child more difficulty when trying to complete homework assignments and ultimately trouble scoring well on exams.
通常情况下,孩子在学校开始学习新东西,却因为在理解基本概念上有困难而感到沮丧。如果他们不能很好地学习基本概念,这只会使孩子在尝试完成家庭作业时更加困难,最终在考试中取得好成绩。
We understand your frustrations, and many of our instructors, tutors, and staff are parents just like you. When your child receives tutoring here in our center, you can rest assured【你可以放心】 they are receiving the highest quality of tutoring and instruction from a certified professional. Each student masters the material since they are taught key concepts in a systematic way. Our teachers are guided instructors who provide students with specific tasks which lead to discoveries and deeper understandings.
我们理解你的沮丧,我们的许多老师、导师和工作人员都是像你一样的父母。当您的孩子在我们中心接受辅导时,您可以放心,他们正在接受由认证专业人员提供的最高质量的辅导和指导。每个学生都掌握了材料,因为他们以系统的方式教授了关键概念。我们的老师是指导性的讲师,他们为学生提供特定的任务,从而导致发现和更深入的理解。
Excerpt 2:
Private Home Tuition Illegal私教非法
The Supreme Education Council (SEC) is to launch a crackdown against private tuition from the second semester of the current academic year.
印度最高教育委员会(SEC)将从本学年第二学期开始打击私人补习。
According to the local daily, the campaign will prohibit private lessons and the promotion of the _phenomenon_ with heavy penalties for people who would violate the rules.
据当地日报报道,该活动将禁止私教和推广这一“现象”,违规者将受到重罚。
The daily, quoting【援引】 Mr. Muhammad, head of the Communication Office at the SEC, said the penalties for offenders could be imprisonment【监禁】 up to【最高】 six months and heavy fines or both.
《华尔街日报》援引美国证券交易委员会通讯办公室负责人_的话说,对违反者的处罚可能是最高六个月的监禁和巨额罚款,或两者兼有。
Officers of the SEC will have the judicial authority to deal with any offence in this regard.
证券交易委员会的官员将有司法权力处理这方面的任何违法行为。
Mr. Muhammadi said measures are being taken in order to implement【实施】 the new law, which was issued【颁布】 last September, for practicing【开展】 of educational services in the country. He urged publishing houses【出版社】 and advertisement platforms to participate in the campaign by refusing to release any material that promotes and encourages private tuition.
穆罕默迪先生说,正在采取措施实施去年9月颁布的新法律,以便在该国开展教育服务。他敦促出版社和广告平台参与这项活动,拒绝发布任何宣传和鼓励私人补习的材料。
According to the new law, the SEC has the authority to【有权】 approve【授权】 educational centers and issue sanctions against【发出制裁】 those who practice without permission. _Unauthorized private tutors will be targeted in the first phase of the drive【阶段】,_ Mr. Muhammadi said.
根据新法律,SEC有权批准教育中心,并对未经许可的人发出制裁。“未经授权的私人教师将在行动的第一阶段成为打击目标,”穆罕默迪说。
To curb the _unhealthy_ practice, awareness campaigns through different media will be run to inform the residents about the new law, he said. The council has already started adding lessons and explanations on the SEC website so that students can study without the help of private tutors.
[1]Recently, ._______ This has stirred much controversy. Some people believe that_______ . As far as I am concerned, _______.
首段明确提出状况,强调大家的观点,并表述自身的见解。
[2]To start with, _______. Under such circumstance, it should be understood that_______ . It is hence natural that_______ . Viewed in pragmatic lens, ._______
第二段明确提出论据,支撑点自身的见解。
[3]Secondly, _______. A story goes in _______. From this story we can see that _______. And more and more people will be willing to with the incentive of _______.
第三段用例证进一步阐述自身的见解。
[4]As a conclusion_______, strikes a balance between_______ and_______ . It does not only , but also_______ .
末尾段重申观点,映衬开始段。
Peoples ideas about donating blood vary from person to people think that it is glorious to donate blood. They hold this opinion because those who are in urgent need of blood can be ,others hold that it is foolish for people to donate their opinion,blood is very precious and losing 200ml or more may do harm to their health.
As to me, I am in favor of the first following are the reasons for my , while it is true that the loss of too much blood is dangerous to ones health,it does not mean that donating a little blood is also the contrary,doctors say that donating a little blood can promote ,there are many people who need our help. If my little donation of blood can pull back somebody on the way to death,will there be anything that can make me happier?
In a word, donating blood is glorious.
Just as is depicted in the picture. It is not difficult to find that in today’s society, more and more people begin to …… . It is rather good news to …… .
The picture reminds us that in China, due to ,…… . Moreover, there are …… .In addition, we should not forget …….
……is a good way to express human love. To some extent, it also reflects individuals sense of social responsibility. It is also a feeling from deep heart that is beyond words and is difficult to obtain no matter how rich one is. Therefore, I strongly advocate that…… . I am sure our society will hence be more beautiful because of…… .
According to the two pictures presented, it can be observed that. In the left picture,…… . A the same time, as the right one shows. Different people have different views on…… .
Some people support by claiming that…… . In their opinion,…… . In addition,…… . Meanwhile, there are some people, especially young men, who…… . Their reasons are quite different, sometimes for…… , sometimes for…… , sometimes simply for…… .
In my point of view, both sides are partly right. To thoroughly analyze this problem, we should take into consideration of all relevant aspects, so as to make the right decision. Therefore, my conclusion would be that…… .
People have different views on what children should do at a very early age. Some think that children should begin their formal education and start to spend most of their time on studies. Others believe that it is still time for young children to play. Both views are based on respective ground.
Those who argue for the playing time for children suggest that children at a very early age are still too young to focus their attention on learning. Their brain may not be ready for serious studies such as comprehension and memorizing learning materials. These people are partially right, for it is true that young children can hardly concentrate. Their attention on one thing lasts for no longer than 15 minutes or so. But we can arrange classes for shorter periods, can’t we? And we can shift teaching subjects. Through putting them to study, young children are occupied with learning but not with playing.
Those who argue for children’s early commencement for formal education believe that being put to studies, children can develop good habit of studying, for the process of learning helps develop children’s mental abilities like the ability to memorize, the ability to understand and the ability to do simple calculation. Children’s habit of studying and love for learning are of great importance to youngsters because these two things set up the sound foundation for their future studies.
Having children start formal education at a very early age benefits young children much more than simply letting them play most of their time. A good habit needs a long time to develop to become a second nature. More importantly, it is better to develop a good habit before a bad one may grow. Similarly, the love for learning should take toots for before the love for playing is established.
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