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作文真题:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write on the topic Changes in the Way of Education. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
解析:
本次四级作文考察形式为论说文,论说文的评分侧重点为内容的完整性、语言的准确性和结构的清晰度。作文话题为“教育方式的改变”。话题新颖,且较为开放,题目较容易读懂,不容易出现大的偏题,难度适中。要求考生能指出教育方式上出现的.变化,分析变化的利与弊,做针对性评论即可。
Changes in the Way of Education
Along with the advent ofthe digital era,great changeshave taken place inevery aspect of our life,among which, the way ofeducationturns out to be the most typical one.
In the past, students used to receive education only in traditional classes, following the orders of teachers, finishing the printed homework and taking part in examinations. If they were confused with something,the only solution was toseek help from the teachers or classmates. However, thanks to the advancement of science and technology, things have changed radically. In this day and age, the popularity of online courses has revolutionized the way students learn. Students can easily gain information, learn knowledge, and even participate tests independentlywith the help of various resources and applications,which has enhanced the learning efficiency and provided much convenience to students.
Indeed, the changes in the way ofeducationare absolutely good , we should also notice that traditional ways will certainly not disappear. In this case, how to best combine the online and traditional ways of education is a concern for everyone.
卷二:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write on the topic Changes in the Way of Transportation. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Changes in the Way of Transportation
Advanced science and technology affords the remarkable improvement of people’s living standards, which mirrors changes in the way oftransportation. As we all know, China in the last century was called “the country on bicycle”, and as time goes by, our current way of transportation has been revolutionized at all.
Many new means of transport can be found easily in our daily life. As for transportation in the cities, cycling is still citizens’ favorite way to deal with their short trip, so the shared bicycle is prevailing and replaces the traditional bike to some extent. While, the traditional bikes gradually feature physical training or performance (such as BMX, Fixed Gear). When it comes to traveling between the cities, passengers in mounting numbers prefer the high-speed train than ordinary train or flight, thanks to China’s advanced construction of railways.
Above all, taking a personal example, these two decades have witnessed the traffic updates in my hometown that there are over 8 subway lines serving, and dozens are in planning and building. Indeed, it is my honor to see our country’s prosperity in transportation.
卷三:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write on the topic Changes in the Way of Communication. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Changes in the Way of Communication
As the basic point to bridge our society, communication is the key process by which people can share information, thoughts and tothe cutting-edge information technology, we make communicating more convenient and efficient via Internet and mobile devices, and naturally affect and change the habits of it.
The change always promises both advantages and detriments. Professionally speaking, the communicating process includes not only spoken and written language, but also body language, personal habits and ways, physical environment -- anything that gives meaning to you cannot fail to notice that our recent online social networkssuch as WeChat, Facebook, etc. focus partially on the former. Undoubtedly, the loss of some information naturally leads to misrepresentation, concealment or deception. Besides, more frightening is that people are getting used to it.
In my opinion, communicating becomes devalued because of its convenience and efficiency and you can completely ignoreyour parents' nagging at home because you have more social options online. Therefore, we should try more face-to-face communication and rationally use social networks.
在理论基础都具备的情况下,一定要动手开始练习写作,写作这个科目,如果不下笔始终无法得到真正的提高!
不要对写作有一种恐惧心理,总觉得自己不会写,写不出来,但是不写一下试试又怎么知道自己的真实水平呢?
只要第一篇完整的论说文写出来,就会发现其实动手很简单,提高也不难!
朱琦老师现在开展了一个《写作公益批改活动》,会选取4篇论效+3篇论说文进行免费批改,想了解的可以私信我~
建议大家一定要在剩下的时间里,每周抽抽个几个小时来专门练习论说文写作,重视质量和速度。
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当不知道如何下笔的时候,最直接有效的解决办法就是背诵模板,然后根据题目要求,往模板里填充中心论点、分论点和论据。
下面列出了一个论说文的万能写作模。
论说文万能模板:
1.引述材料
第一段,(100字)首先,引用原文是非常必要的,作为一篇完整的文章,应该让看的人明白你的论证从何处引申和展开的,所以在文章开头用100字以内简洁的引述原文,并抛出自己的观点。
2.破题
第二段,(100字)破题,对材料有简单的分析和引申,强化观点。
3.正面论证
第三段,(250字)正面论证观点,把3个较短的例证组成排比句形式。(最好古代,近代,现代)
4.反面论证
第四段,(250字)反面论证观点,仿照上面的正面论述,列举3个例子,组成一个排比句。
5.总结升华和最后一次点题
第五段,(100字)重复材料论点,再次点题,展开号召和呼吁,说明这种情况既然如此,那么,作为我们应该如何如何做,升华主题,把文章内容再推高一个层次。
建议:多使用排比句,特别是在文章的开头和结尾,这是阅卷老师重点关注的部分。
另外,语言尽量短小精悍,最好有时能形成对仗,多使用反问句,或者假设,常用词汇:试想,若没有,何以。
很多同学写作的最大问题是事实论据不够,这其实是由于素材积累不够造成的。要做的就是去背“万能素材”,这类素材可以一例多用,帮助同学节约时间。
1.什么是万能素材
“万能素材”指的是可以在多个观点立意下都可以套用的素材。
比如:司马迁写《史记》(这个素材实际写作中尽量不要用,太老套了),就可以从多个方面来使用。
第一个是他在经受了诸多磨难后,在逆境中发奋撰写出史记这样的鸿篇巨制,可以用来论证逆境/考验对人的影响这样的论点。
第二个是司马迁在写史记时,对每一个人物或历史事件都进行了大量的调查研究,实地考察过多地风土人情,所以可以用来论证实践出真知的观点。
2.万能素材积累的渠道
这些论据积累的渠道是有很多的,例如:
(1)报刊书籍(主要是_)。
(2)学习强国APP等。
(3)论说文写作公众号等,推荐“文学琦读”公众号。
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