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这样立意适合找不到更好角度的情况,但是有泛泛而谈的问题,实际上如果能具体一点会更好。例如2011年讲到环境污染的问题,你可以直接立论点:“治理环境污染对于社会发展很重要”,也可以具体一点:“治理环境污染对于社会文明建设以及经济可持续发展有重要意义”,后者其实能让你在后文的论述中找到条理。
这里有一点我要重点提一下:不要堆砌没有信息量的句子!不要堆砌没有信息量的句子!不要堆砌没有信息量的句子!例如这种:Indeed,what is denoted above is inspring and thought-provoking. 这种句子写上去就像在大写加粗告诉阅卷老师_我提前背的!_,阅卷老师看到只会内心狂喜,从这句话他就大概看出你水平了。
背诵是提高写作的又一有效途径。要学好写作,首先要处理好语言输入与输出之间的关系。前者是后者的前提条件。如果头脑空空如也,就根本谈不上写出像模像样的文章。只有读过大量东西,并且有意识地将其中精彩部分储存于记忆之中(commit the highlights to memory),才能保证下笔流畅、文通字顺。因此,背诵对于写作极为重要。但背诵不是机械记忆,而是有选择性的背诵,是有意义的记忆。因为机械背诵的结果要么是记忆很快就荡然无存、了无痕迹,要么是无法活学活用、付诸实践。背诵包括五个方面:重点词汇、常用套语、精彩句子、优秀段落、经典篇章。
默写也是提高写作的一个重要环节,即把背熟的东西付诸纸端。这个过程不仅是为了检验自己的记忆效果,更为重要的是训练正确的书面表达能力。在英语学习中,我们少有机会动笔写英文,长期以来,手笔生疏,导致提笔即错。再者,由于受汉语思维和习惯的种种影响,在潜意识里容易犯一些英语表达错误。普遍存在的语言错误包括主谓一致、时态处理、冠词用法、名词单复数形式、单词拼写等,尤其在单词拼写方面,很多人混淆词性,把society, economy, difficulty写成social, economic, difficult;再如字母位置错误,将true, tired, modern写作ture, tried, morden;诸如此类。这些看似微妙的错误如果不加以有意识的克服,可能会发展为根深蒂固的习惯,成为写作中的重大弊病。通过默写,写出曾经记诵过的段落字句,之后自我查验、批改,发现并纠正在动笔中的错误,可以有效克服自己潜意识中的英文错误,提高实际写作时的熟练和准确程度。
What I Have Lived For
Three passions, simple but overwhelmingly strong, have governed my life: the longing for love, the search for knowledge, and unbearable pity for the suffering of mankind. These passions, like great winds, have blown me hither and thither, in a wayward course, over a deep ocean of anguish, reaching to the very verge of despair.
I have sought love, first, because it brings ecstasy—ecstasy so great that I would often have sacrificed all the rest of life for a few hours of this joy. I have sought it, next, because it relieves loneliness—that terrible loneliness in which one shivering consciousness looks over the rim of the world into the cold unfathomable lifeless abyss. I have sought it, finally, because in the union of love I have seen, in a mystic miniature, the prefiguring vision of the heaven that saints and poets have imagined. This is what I sought, and though it might seem too good for human life, this is what—at last—I have found.
With equal passion I have sought knowledge. I have wished to understand the hearts of men. I have wished to know why the stars shine. And I have tried to apprehend the Pythagorean power by which number holds sway above the flux. A little of this, but not much, I have achieved.
Love and knowledge, so far as they were possible, led upward toward the heavens. But always pity brought me back to earth. Echoes of cries of pain reverberate in my heart. Children in famine, victims tortured by oppressors, helpless old people—a hated burden to their sons, and the whole world of loneliness, poverty, and pain make a mockery of what human life should be. I long to alleviate the evil, but I can't, and I too suffer.
This has been my life. I have found it worth living, and would gladly live it again if the chance were offered me.
在自己写文章时,应有意识地调用以前的积累,正向迁移,融入自己的写作,包括语言表达、文章章法、写作技巧等,最终达到学以致用的目的。如果记忆中有像“Not that I loved Caesar less, but that I loved Rome more.”(不是我爱凯撒浅,而是我爱罗马深。)这样的经典名句,当写作有关英语学习的文章时不妨模仿这个句式: Not that we can't master English, but that we have not been willing to take pains. (不是我们不能掌握英语,而是我们不愿付出努力。)正如学好书法常要描红,学好绘画常须描摹,写好文章则需要模仿。Beauty imitated is beauty recreated. (模仿美就是创造美。)赋予经典的表达以新的内涵,这也是一种创新。模仿他人目的在于提高自己。模仿与借鉴为写作所必须。总之,Good writing favors the prepared mind. (好的写作总是照顾那些有准备的人。)
英语写作能力的真正提高有赖于上述概括为十字的五大策略,望朋友们勤之勉之,将其融入自己的学习实践,打下坚实的语言基础,真正实现从阅读到写作的飞跃,达到英语读写能力的完美统一。逐步积累,有所准备,需要之时就可以手到擒来,应对自如,使英文写作成为自身的一项技能。
my view,XXX is supposed to .....Meanwhile ,xxx should.......
这里其实不需要什么句型了,用自己语言写就可以。让人困难的其实是纠结到底是给什么建议好。这里建议使用主体法,从个人,学校,企业,政府,社会等主体去考虑。例如学校可以开展相应课程,企业承担市场教育主体责任等等。写多了你就会发现,这几个主体分别对应的表达几乎在每篇文章都通用。
第三段基本没什么营养,如果是感谢信就再感谢一次,如果是道歉信就再道歉一次,如果是邀请信就期待您的光临。+ 感谢您的时间,期待收到您的回信。
Thanks for your am looking forward to hearing from you in your earliest convenience.
这一类的套话比比皆是,我就不罗列了,大家挑自己喜欢的用就可以了。
My fellow students,
As the current Chinaman of students’ Union of ABC university, I am calling on everyone on campus to pay attention to the seriousness of environmental deteriorations.
First of all, the phenomenon of Global warming has been damaging our environment and putting enormous pressure on the survival of wild lives. A growing number of animal species are facing the danger of extinction because of the loss of their natural habitats. In addition, the haze brought by the air pollution greatly jeopardizes people’s health and deserves our immediate attention.
I strongly recommend that we all do what we can to save our planet. To live a low carbon life would be the least we can do. Garbage classification and recycling seems to be urgent for all of us. Thank you for your attention and I am looking forward to the change of us all.
Truly yours,
Zhang Wei
王力老师,同学们亲切称之为力哥,2007年以来全国MBA英语首席培训师,复旦大学客座教授,帮助5万多名学子进入研究生殿堂,业界人称“英语阅读秒杀之父”。即使文章没看懂,选项没看懂,力哥依然能教你做对题。考MBA,考管理类硕士,找力哥。
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constructive 有益处的
substantial 大量的
extensive 广泛的;全面的
ever-developing 不断发展的
fabulous 极好的
unparalleled 杰出的
(a) startling (innovation) 一项惊人的发明
splendid (culture) 灿烂辉煌的文化
the basis of the analysis above,we may draw a conclusion that .....
the preceding discussion,it is readily apprent that .....
(或者其他类似表达都可以,不一定要选高级复杂的,一定要选符合自己语言水平的,不然和后面出现落差会降低阅卷老师印象分。基础好的同学尽量选短的。)
这一点其实很多人会忽视。一提到写作文,大多数人都觉得写句子和单词的运用令人头秃,但是实际上,句子和单词都不会是致命的问题。致命的问题是整篇文章为写而写,不知所云。(虽然考研英语作文确实是为写而写,但是都已经快到研究生阶段了,写东西言之有物逻辑清晰应该要成为基本素养了)。
首先首段的立意一定要清晰,第二段的论述和第三段的总结都一定要围绕立意(也就是你的核心论点)展开,所以立意的时候千万别给自己挖坑跳。一个话题能展开的角度千千万,选你会写的去写,别为难自己,就是这么简单。
(2)模仿模仿模仿,模仿之后再创新,这是最快的学习办法!!
在不愿意去啃语法书去了解复杂句型的情况下,去模仿别人写得好的句子,当然你先要保证你模仿的句子本身就是正确的。
所以你可以模仿的句子来源有作文书上的范文,这就要求要对作文书质量进行仔细的臻选。阅读题的文章里的句子,这个我强力推荐。考研文章的语法是肯定不会错的,里面句子和表达的质量自不必说,通过模仿文章中写得好的句子还能增加对文章熟悉度,一句两得。所以大家做阅读题的时候不要太单纯,选出那个ABCD意义真的不大。把每一篇文章都当作信息富矿,你会发现自己成长很快。
(3)练字练字练字,人是天生的颜控,阅卷老师也不例外。
虽然我是为爱发电写了这么多,但是要是你们给我点赞的话我会很开心哒~
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套语指流行的公式化语言,在写作中适当使用颇有必要。如在商业信函结尾,期望对方早日回复的表达方式就要遵循套语的基本模式,使表达规范得体。下面试举几个例子:
Kindly favor us with an early reply.请早日赐复。
Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.如能及时回复,将不胜感谢。
We look forward to hearing from you soon.早日回复。
We are expecting your prompt reply.急盼回复。
Please have the kindness to answer this letter quickly.请早日回信。
Kindly let us have your reply at your earliest convenience.请在您方便时尽早赐函。
We would appreciate it if you could respond right away.如能即刻回复,将不胜感谢。
当前流行应试写作模板,即套语的使用贯穿文章始终,为考生提供万能公式型的文章主架,每句表达皆由固定套语框定,考生只要背下套用句型、过渡词语,在考试中根据特定考题填充具体内容。这种应试策略使写出的文章矫揉造作,生硬刻板,虽可以让考生及格过关,但绝对得不到高分。套语的过多使用不妨可以比作大海中的救生圈,有了它,仅仅可以让不擅游泳者保全性命,却无法自在畅游,一展泳姿。一般而言,套语较为空洞,如使用过多,文章容易流于空泛,言之无物。写作宜虚实结合,形式与内容相统一。下例是一篇比较在家学习与入校读书谁优谁劣的范文,文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和过渡词语,不仅增强了表达效果,而且实现了形式与内容的统一。
There are two major arguments that can be made for studying at home. First, as advances in the electronic media have brought the whole world of scholarship into the home via the Internet and educational courses on TV, the classroom is no longer the only place for acquiring knowledge. Second, it is widely held that a person studies better in the familiar surroundings of his own home and when he can arrange his own study time.
But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are advantages to studying in the classroom, too. Being surrounded by people of roughly the same abilities and interests can be a great stimulus to acquiring knowledge, whereas studying in solitude at home is boring for many people. More importantly, there can be no substitute for a good teacher, who must not only be able to impart facts and theories, but also to appraise and encourage his students.
Given the choice between these two methods of learning, I prefer the classroom. This is because I am the sort of person who finds it difficult to concentrate on study in the midst of household chores, and disturbances from visitors and telephone calls. The classroom environment, I feel, is the only one in which most people feel comfortable applying all their energies to the all-important task of acquiring knowledge.
individual / character / folks
——positive/ favorable/ rosy/ promising/ perfect/ pleasurable/ excellent/ outstanding/ superior/ remarkable/ valuable
dreadful/ unfavorable/ poor/ adverse/ ill/ be less impressive
an army of/an ocean of/a sea of /a multitude of/a host of /numerous /a mount number of
harbor the idea that / take the attitude that/ hold the view that / it is widely shared that / it is universally acknowledged that
——several /quiet a few/a slice of
——affair/business /matter
——shared
many benefit ——
reap huge fruit
10. in my opinion——
for my part/from my own perspective
and more——
increasingly/growing
beneficial/rewarding/could be of enormous assistance
−−shopper/client/consumer/purchaser
——quite/ exceedingly /extremely /intensely
——hardly inevitable
——key/crucial/essential
17. be interested in ——sth appeal to sb
attention——capture attention
——give rise to/lead to/result in/trigger
——be fearful to
——desire
for——
there are several reasons behind
attention to—— pour attention to
——bear in mind that
a good time——enjoy a good time
——interation
against/disagree on sth——frown on sth
example /instance——to name only a few as an example
——a variety of /diversity
——be well-off financially
——ultimately
——solely
——be fascinated with
图画的下面一般会有一个简短的文字说明(caption)是需要翻译出来的,简单一点的话可以直接写成:
caption reads:“......”
caption indicates :_....._
caption tells us that .... (大家自己看着哪个好用就用哪个哈)
翻译完文字说明之后需要写主旨句,主旨句可以放到第一段最后一句写,也可以放到第二段第一句写,看你喜欢。主旨句非常关键,直接关系到你的作文是否切题,以及你的二三段要安排什么内容。如果秀一点的话,其实文字说明和主旨句可以结合成一句:
The caption below reads:“......”,which tells us that ...... /
which reminds us that ...... /
which informs us that the drawer is painting the picture with the purpose of......
(大家自己看着哪个好用就用哪个,但是讲句实在话,对于基础好的同学来说套话用得越少越好)
立意的角度五花八门千奇百怪,结合主题言之有理就行,大家也不必拘泥于我下面说的角度。
但是我发现,其实,有个特别简单粗暴的办法,直接说某某事情对某某方面来说很重要就行了。
XXX is beneficial / is of utmost importance / can never be underestimated
for the sake of our personal growth / social development / education system improvement /.......... (其中个人成长和社会发展就能把大部分话题涵盖了)
比如刚刚上面那张图:
培养自信心对个人成长来说非常重要。
比如2020年题目:
养成良好的习惯对个人成长来说非常重要。
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